Bottle Top Project

Here is my bottle top project at 75DPI consisting of 7 words. The saying is "Bird in hand beats two in bush. "

Comments

[Jocelyn]

Alex,
You seemed to challenge yourself in this project and I am pleased to see that. The decisions you made to organize this project turned out well but the background is less associated to the theme than I think it should be.

Also note, the fist image is so iconic that we will see it as a fighting symbol, or in association with the Black Panthers, that it does not read as 'hand.'

These are very specific notes, but overall you have given us a lot to explore with a good flow.

Jocelyn